There's a lesson here somewhere about not posting part of a multi-part story without first having written all of it. I swear I'll post more of I Am the Kracken as soon as it makes sense as a story again. But here's a short story I wrote for a competition - less all the typos that I managed to write in the original. What happened to my spell check? Who knows...
The first time it had happened, she was running. Whether it was to or from something she couldn't remember, because suddenly the corridor she was in had disappeared. The world around her faded to black and she was jolted by the sudden realisation that she was in a dream before noting the eerie sensation of being watched. She looked around to find nothing but darkness and a weightless feeling, as though gravity had been suspended. It hadn’t lasted long, but a few nights later she was back in that place of uneasy blackness. She tried not to move and just sense her surroundings, and there hadn’t been a flicker of any light, any sound, and she couldn’t feel any movement in the air when she twitched. It was as though she had lost all of her senses, but strangely, when she looked down, she could see herself. The pale skin of her hands and arms seemed to glow while the world around her existed in a void of nothingness. The second night she felt more than an observer: she felt a presence. She had many more nights when she was pulled abruptly from dreams into the empty, weightless, dark world before she heard the voice, and it seemed to vibrate the very atmosphere around her. There were no words, only the sound of the voice, and she knew it was him. After that night, he called out to her every time she would sleep. He was determined to reach out to her, and that was what she had always loved about him. Though he had no words to give her, she was comforted by his presence, following the strength of his call during the day in the feelings she knew he had planted in her mind.
I love the language you use in the second paragraph when describing the dream. Although I have to admit I found it a bit hard to follow what was happening.
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